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Impossible is just a big word thrown around by small men who find it easier to live in the world they’ve been given than to explore the power they have to change it. Impossible is not a fact. It’s an opinion. Impossible is not a declaration. It’s a dare. Impossible is potential. Impossible is temporary. Impossible is nothing.

Wednesday, November 5, 2008

Standarded Arguments #2 (Critique at will, they need some work :) )

Lessons of a Cancer Scare

    1. The skin cancer mistake at the Ottawa hospital is a frightening demonstration of what can happen when a medical staffing levels are allowed to slip, especially as technology becomes more complex.

2.         2. At the time the doctors were involved in several difficult tasks and were sometimes working 60 hours a week

          3. People make mistakes even competent medical physicists especially when they are under pressure

4.      4. Medical technology is getting increasingly complex, yet the staffing guidelines haven’t kept pace

 

Therefore

      5. Any organization is prone to errors when staff are over worked and technology advances   

 

http://www.canada.com/ottawacitizen/news/editorials/story.html?id=2a40d2f2-d27b-475f-b01b-09b5acfe5de7

2 comments:

Silverstein said...

you forgot the comma after therefore... very very stupid of you :)

Silverstein said...

but it was very good. i thoroughly enjoyed it sweendor